Ooo, I'm obsessed with the way you describe the scenery! Being able to paint such a vivid picture in such little words is genuinely admirable, and I instantly felt myself being immersed into the world and shoes of the character you were describing. I also adore how the little things the player chooses to inspect reflects the poem being made at the end, it's something I wasn't expecting, but was a lovely way to incorporate the results of the choices, tying things together neatly at the end! Nice job!! :>
oh this is sooo sweet and melancholic i had fun reading this !!!! i rlly love the poems created at the end! also love the optional soundtrack! ty for sharing :]
The writing in this is so gorgeous, and, if I may be so lush, paints just as beautiful a picture as the cover image. I really liked the way you made use of the word count with the custom poem made at the end from our actions in the day; now I'm curious why we got kicked from the court that made us so melancholy
thank you so much!! haha we probably got kicked from the court because we said something that the emperor didn't like or we flew a lil too close to the sun and the emperor thought we were trying to overthrow him <3
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Love what you did with the translation here. The poem flows really well in both languages.
Ooo, I'm obsessed with the way you describe the scenery! Being able to paint such a vivid picture in such little words is genuinely admirable, and I instantly felt myself being immersed into the world and shoes of the character you were describing. I also adore how the little things the player chooses to inspect reflects the poem being made at the end, it's something I wasn't expecting, but was a lovely way to incorporate the results of the choices, tying things together neatly at the end! Nice job!! :>
oh this is sooo sweet and melancholic i had fun reading this !!!! i rlly love the poems created at the end! also love the optional soundtrack! ty for sharing :]
thanks for playing!! :)
Love it, the writing is very elegant and conveys perfectly the character's melancholy.
thank you very much! <3
The writing in this is so gorgeous, and, if I may be so lush, paints just as beautiful a picture as the cover image. I really liked the way you made use of the word count with the custom poem made at the end from our actions in the day; now I'm curious why we got kicked from the court that made us so melancholy
thank you so much!! haha we probably got kicked from the court because we said something that the emperor didn't like or we flew a lil too close to the sun and the emperor thought we were trying to overthrow him <3
XD that sucks for us! I hope he comes to his senses and unbanishes us someday :3
Agreed! The poem at the end was such a lovely way to bring together the choices made.